To: Dr. Stice From: Ryan Pregent English 314 October 15, 2015   For this weeks assignment, I located a bad proposal offered online at https://image.slidesharecdn.com/9-goodproposalbadproposalvn-121227185807-phpapp02/95/writing-a-research-paper-proposal-2-638.jpg?cb=1356656551. The proposal was very brief and simple. From my initial take away, “Martha’ was the supposed author of the proposal. Also, there was no clarification as to whom the proposal […]

Project Proposal: Bad Example: Micro/Macro Performance I was thinking that I might do a performance of painting two small paintings. Like 2 inches sqwared. I’ll probably paint these in front of the class, but I might also just video myself doing this at home and show the video in class. I like to paint and […]

To: Dr. Stice From: Marie Gotti Date: 10/12/2015 When I Googled “bad proposal examples” I found an example at this address:  https://submitalink.net/wp-content/uploads/2015/09/example-of-a-proposal-anarqx1m.jpg. My initial response to this proposal was that I could not identify the creator and readers of this proposal. This means I do not know who the audience is for this proposal, so […]

Website: https://www.counterpunch.org/2013/08/06/a-business-proposal-for-the-nsa/ Author: Sanford Kelson Addressed to: four star General Keith B. Alexander (former Director of the NSA) Sanford Kelson sent in August 6, 2013 a business proposal to the then Director of the NSA General Alexander. Since General Alexander worked for the US Army he was required to use a set of guidelines for […]

        Hi, I found this example when I Googled “poor proposal examples and here is the link  These are my suggestions on how to improve this proposal: First, it’s obvious with “Mrs. Brown’s class” written on the top right corner that this isn’t a professional proposal and is probably a middle or […]

Prompt: Search online and find an example of a “bad” proposal. Then craft a short memo outlining why this proposal is “bad” and suggestions ways it could be re-done in the future. Your memo should be at least two paragraphs in length and should be posted along with the link. When you comment on your […]